Thursday, 1 October 2015

Radio News

When did the BBC start broadcasting Radio?
18th October, 1922.
When and why did Radio One start broadcasting?
30th September 1967.
What is the Licence Fee and how much is it?
145,50 per year.
What is the royal charter?
The constitutional basis for the BBC.
What is the BBC Trust?
The independent governing body for the BBC.
What is the BBC's Mission?
To enrich people's lives with programmes that inform, educate and entertain.
What is the difference between national and local BBC radio?
National channels run national stories and mainstream music where as local stations will only report on stories which happen in a certain place.
What percentage of the population listen to BBC Radio?
65%

When did Commercial Radio first start broadcasting in the UK?
8th October, 1973.
What was the name of the first commercial radio station?
KDKA - 1920.
When did Capital FM start broadcasting?
16th October, 1973.
Who owns Capital FM and which other brands does this company own?
Global Radio, own others like; Heart, Classic, LBC, Juice, Gold.
What percentage of the population listen to this organisation's stations (all brands)?
39%
How is commercial radio funded?
Broadcast receiver licences, government grants and public donations.
How many commercial radio stations are there in the UK?

How many companies control the majority of these - who are they?
Global, Bauer, Local Radio Company, KRD,


Copy - Reading from a script and a script only.

Vox - Public opinion, small audio clips.

Voicer - Reporter, talking to experts.

Clip - pre-recorded, often parts of interviews.

Wrap - A mixture of all the above.

Codes and Conventions of Radio -

Presenter / Usually one, sometimes two,
News stories, dependant on which station you're listening to,
Interviews or call ins,
Music,
Competitions.

Radio Script Methods -

Copy,
Voicer,
Vox,
Wrap,
Clip

Daron Kelly, 42, was killed in the streets of Basildon, Essex after being attacked.

The police say that a thirteen year old girl has been arrested on suspicion of murder after Kelly was found in Caister Drive at 21:30 on Tuesday night.

Four others: a 20 year old man, a 17 year old man, a 16 year old man and a 15 year old girl have all also been arrested and are currently being held in custody.

Residents around Caister Drive fought to save the lorry driver's life although they did everything they could.

Kelly was treated by paramedics as they arrived on the scene although he inevitably died later that night in Hospital.

Any witnesses are urged to contact the Essex police at sdcappeals@essex.pnn.police.uk



Free Range Food Script - 160 words.

Newsreader intro script: Here at South Downs, free range eggs aren't available in all of the cafes. Having this news recently been released, there have been protests around the college. Here is reporter Jake Stokes with more information.



Free range eggs news voice clip

https://soundcloud.com/jakestokes98/free-range-eggs/s-lU8RC





Story 1 – 75% of teachers set to leave in the next 6 months in England
A recent Guardian survey for teachers has revealed that 43% of teachers across England plan to leave the profession in the next five years. It was also revealed that 98% of teachers are under increase pressure and 82% described their workload as unmanageable. The survey also asked colleges and schools about their staffing and 79% of educational facilities said they are struggling to recruit or retain teachers. On top of that, 88% think that the problem is only going to get worse. The almost 5000 responses to the survey held by the Guardian also  revealed that 73% of teachers mental & physical health were being affected because they were working 65 hour weeks. One teacher said I work 60 hours a week on average and still dont feel like Im doing a good job – I want a life outside of work too.    
Story 2 – Poland Prime Minister Beata Szydło says his country is no longer prepared to take the 7,000 refugees they agreed to accept in negotiations with the EU because of the deadly Brussels attacks. She also added that she does not see any possibility for the refugees to come to Poland.  They had planned to take 400 refugees within the year although they have decided against the agreement after the Brussels attacks for the safety of the country..  
Story 3 – After all, New Zealand has decided to keep its current flag – keeping the UK link. The results of the expensive referendum, which cost the country 12 million pounds, are expected to be confirmed next week. Rumors have it that only 43.2% voted for the new flag design – which was 915,000 votes. John Key was hugely in favor of the new flag although it wasnt enough influence to get a majority vote. Even though he didnt get the result that he wanted,  he said that NZ should embrace their flag and furthermore Be proud of it!  He said later Obviously Im a bit disappointed there was no change but nearly a million people voted for change, just because its not the outcome I wanted doesnt mean it wasnt a worthwhile process.
Story 4  - UEFA is considering a major revamp for the format of the Champions League. This could involve cutting the group stage to 16 teams instead of 32. The change is being driven by continental clubs concern that they are being left behind by huge revenues generated by the PL. Sources from PL clubs say that the format could be getting changed into what essentially would be two mini super leagues almost like the NFL. If changes were to happen, it would not be implemented 
 VOX POP


Weather – The weather today is very breezy across the whole of the England with large chances of rain which is expected to go into the weekend.


Voice Piece

http://soundcloud.com/user-482863360/jake-vox-1

http://soundcloud.com/user-482863360/jake-vox-2



Assignment Two Evaluation

I aimed at Sky News listeners with my voice piece. I aimed at these people as they are generally older people who listen to the radio for the news. I also think this audience would enjoy my news piece as it has a wide range of stories related to different things; I have some politics stories, an opening story about a relevant topic with a lot of statistics and a sports story which everyone likes. I think I have something for every listener.
My opening story was about the teachers and extremely shocking statistics found from a survey done across Britain. At the time it was extremely relevant and had many news values, it made front page in the Guardian and The Mail. I decided to make this my opening story as no one can really ignore it, teachers will have a hardened opinion on the topic, parents will be interested as their kids will be attending schools, colleges and universities for the next 5-15 years depending on their age and even young people who listen to the news can be interested in this story.
My second story was about Poland and their refusal to take in their agreed number of refugees. This was big news at the time, creating ripples in plan the EU created to take in refugees and had everyone's eyes on our PM for a while. It had a lot of news values and I think older people, who I aimed my news at, would be interested.
My third story, also an international story (like the former), is to do with a New Zealand flag referendum and how they decided to keep their current flag. I think from my four stories, this is by far the weakest one I have done. Most viewers probably don't really care and it doesn't affect almost all of the listeners. If I were to re-write the radio script I probably would have replaced it with a different story to pique listener's interest even further.
My fourth story is about sports, specifically football and the change in format for the UEFA Cup. I was initially going to report on a result of a recent game, although I thought about my listenership and decided on a story an older audience could relate to. I think even people who don't follow football can appreciate what's happening as it's a huge deal. Football is also extremely popular worldwide, and by far the most popular sport in England so it's bound to get a lot of interest from listeners.

As asked, I did two copy written stories, a news reader voice piece and a vox pop with the weather closing out, which ended about 10 seconds over the time which was required. I think in the audio recordings I spoke clearly and it was professionally done. As for the stories, I out-sourced and found the stories on different news sites - with the NZ Flag story and the opening story coming from the Guardian. I wrote the stories in my own words and tried to look at them from a different angle if possible.

I think that it went well all together and my script was professionally written and produced. The only thing that I would change if I were to do it again would be the flag story. I didn't breath any legal restraints during the production and the writing of it so it would be good enough to be produced on national radio or TV as they both have the same legal restraints.






























Radio Comparison Assignment

1st - Sky News Radio 5PM Bulletin
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zF2EhYLuz8g

Stories -
Story one - Footballer received bullet in mail, threat over racial allegations.
Story two - Two men appear in court over murder of a decapitated body found.
Story three - Farmer jailed after animals found dead on his farm.
Story four - Man jailed after breaching court order to stop him staking former classmates.
Story five - Football fixtures and results
Story six - Olympic ceremony theme song announced.


BBC and Commercial Radio
Commercial is the broadcasting of media and content by privately owned corporate companies. BBC, on the other hand, is a public service broadcaster available to everyone who pays through a TV/Radio licensing fee.
Commercial stations have went more down the music route, there is a chosen genre of music where the popular tracks of that genre are played throughout the day. On commercial radio channels, the presenter(s) have little to no personality. BBC stations tend to be more mature and you can find a wider variety of music. The BBC encourages personality. They also believe that they should deliver the community with the most recent news, information, and guests.

Sky News Radio is a constant radio station that provides hourly news bulletins, scripts and other services for clients. Sky News Radio is commercial radio.

Who is the audience?
Radio stations tend to generally be aimed at older people, as the majority of younger people don't listen to radio stations for news. It talks a lot about sports and has a lot of crime also, making me think the majority of listeners are male.

Why do you think the first story is the most important?
The opening story was the Ferdinand racism/threat story. Sport is largely followed by a lot of people so it'll get a lot of attention already. Also racism stories and things of the like have a stigma of being controversial. This is good for news station as it gets around to a lot of people. The first story doesn't always have to be the story that is the most important thing happening in the world.
I feel it was also talked about in more depth and for longer than the rest as it had more news values, it stirred conversation.

The whole bulletin was national news, as often it is with Sky as they are an international station.

The stories are treated differently for obvious reasons. The more gruesome and sinister stories are going to be told in a more serious and deep tone, like the story of the stalker and the murderer. But stories about football fixtures and the Olympic theme are going to be told in a friendlier and more light-hearted tone.


2nd - Jack FM 6 PM Bulletin

Stories -
1st - Robber killed by owner of house during home invasion
2nd - Politics
3rd - Woman attacked.
4- Rugby
5 - Football results and fixtures

How is it different from the first radio station?
The first radio station had a lot more stories in a longer of time. They both seem to cover the same types of news, but Jack FM has more local news where as Sky seem to focus on international.

What format is the station?
The format of Jack FM is most noticeably a music programme although it does a bit of everything to attract the most viewers. From looking at Jack FM's website, you can clearly tell it focuses on music as it primarily advertises festivals and music in the banner and homepage. Although there are tabs for everything deeper on the website.

Audience for this station?
I think this stations aims for much a younger demographic. The bulletin I heard was only 1 minute and 3 seconds long and covered stories that maybe younger people would be interested in. They also seemed to talk about sport for a long period of time. Also, their main content is a constant supply of mainstream music so I think it tries to cater to the young even while still covering news, weather and other things.

Discuss the top story, why is the first one?
The top story was about a man who had killed a robber in his home. This, like Sky's first story, is one that will create A LOT of controversy. Should the man be tried for murder, or was it in self defence? It was relevant, and it included death which has a lot of value in news. They treated it with quite a serious tone, as they should have, although it wasn't in the spirit of the radio station.

How were the stories treated?
All of the stories were treated with a friendly tone, apart from the first one about the murder. I think this further proves that it's catered towards a younger audience as they aren't going to listen to an old, monotone voice speak about the news. They seem to speak about the sports stories for longer than the rest, especially the politics.

National or local?
The first stories were national, although they focused locally with the sports and the woman attack.


Comparison of First Story

Sky News - Footballer Threatened and Racism allegations
Jack FM - Man kills home invader.

Straight away, you'll notice that they both involve some form of violence. The footballer had been sent a bullet in the mail. They both create a lot of talk around the subjects as racism has been, and probably always will be, a controversial topic. It's also extremely controversial with the killing of the man, as he most likely killed him in self defence and he was on his property although was it really right to kill him, or was it even on purpose?




Laws, Regulation and Ethics

Defamation
- Defamation is the act of ruining or damaging someones reputation or career through libel or slander; slander being through speech and libel through writing/text.
Things that are defamatory:
Damaging someone's profession/income,
Lowers their reputation or reliability in the public eye,
Exposes them to hatred, ridicule or contempt,
Causes them to be shunned.

To win a defamation case in a court of law, a person must prove four things:
Another person conveyed defamatory messages they knew, or should have known, to be false,
The material containing the message was published and available to the public, or others,
The person suing can prove they are the person being defamed in the published material,
The damage that had been done to them as a result.

If you are being defamed, anyone has the right to sue. Although, obviously, people of a higher reputation have more reason to sue as they have more to defend; this also means that they can sue for more money. On top of that, people can also sue for punitive damages - this is when they are required to pay more as punishment.

What are the legal consequences?
Jail time is a possibility, although only in extreme measures in certain countries, where defamation is a criminal offence, other than a civil wrong-doing. Usually they'll be issued a fine, with the amount relative to the amount of damage caused. On top of a fine, as mentioned earlier, they can be charged punitive damages.

Contempt of Court
-Contempt of Court is the offence of being disrespectful or disobedient to a Judge, or it's officers, in a court of law. It's considered illegal behaviour as it does not obey or respect the rules of the court of law. It is often labelled as 'wilful disregard for the authority of the court'.

There are two different kinds of contempt, one being as mentioned above - being generally rude and disobedient in the court. Where as the other form of contempt is not following orders given to you by the Judge or other authority.
Contempt of Court is the highest power that a Judge holds to give when someone in the court is being rude.

Judge's rulings of contempt can often land people up to a month in Jail, which some consider far too much although it is considered in court, a criminal offence.

In 2013, a man was jailed for almost 2 years after vaulting a gate and attacking the judge after she had jailed his brother for manslaughter.  In the trial, the judge issued the punishment and claimed "We have in this country courts which are open to the public, but what you did was an attack on justice, on the administration of justice, an attack on the rule of law."

Reporting Restrictions -
Children
In England, people caused of committing offences who are 18 or younger are dealt with in youth courts. There are automatic bans in place relative to identifying minors, and any information which could lead to the confirmation of their identity. 
You must not publish their:
- name,
- school,
- adress,
- photos
- ANYTHING that leads to their identity.

In a magistrates and crowns court, there are restrictions on what is allowed to be reported whilst a case is active.  These things are:
The name of the court,
The judge, 
Summary of the charges,
Names, addresses, images, and ages of ALL defendants and witnesses,
name of lawyers and arrangements of bail. 
This may sound like a lot, however arrangements are often made to lift some of the restrictions depending on the information. The judge has the power to lift these restrictions whenever they want.

Legal consequences and punishment tend to come under contempt, although depending on the depth of what you have reported, things can be much more serious. With threats of facing multiple years in jail.













Working Freelance

Working Freelance - Advantages and Disadvantages 

Advantages 
Negotiable Deadlines
Choose your work
Make more contacts 
Work from home
No routine
Set your hourly rate
Develop skills
Wide variety of jobs

Disadvantages 

Lonely
Hard to find work
Less working hours 
Uncertainty 
Motivation 
Costs - equipment 
Competition - all round skills; financing, marketing, CPD, networking.
No holiday pay 
Companies might turn down your work
Not turning down work


Jobs that I have recently applied for all offer part-time contracts. 
What is a part-time contract?
Part-time is a form of work which does less hours than full time employment. A typical part-time job is fewer than 30 or 35 hours per week.

Business Card


Competencies

Punctuality - 
Organisation
Communication
Customer Service
Team Working 



ASSIGNMENT.


1. What is your chosen sector? Tell me as much as you can about what this sector does.
Sport / Technology Journalism.
Journalists collect and gather information in multiples way and present it in a written or spoken form, Journalists could also work for a bigger news conglomerate or they can work freelance for themselves. Sports Journalists go to different sporting events and report on what happens, giving statistics and live updates, they could also do opinion pieces if they worked for a more relaxed company, like a magazine.



2. What is your chosen specialism? Explain this as fully as possible.
I would like to work as a Football reporter as I think I have a knack for writing and I thoroughly enjoy it as well as the sport. I would also enjoy writing for a technology/gaming website/magazine as I enjoy playing games and keeping up to date with new technology and gadgets therefore giving me a knowledge in this area . I would like to write for a website or a niche magazine in comparison to a newspaper.


3. What is freelance? Explain as fully as possible the roles you would have to fulfil if you were working as a freelance.
Working freelance is basically being your own boss. You would work from home whilst promoting and selling yourself to different organisations and companies so they'll hire you to do articles in the area that you specialise in. You'd have to do your own financing so you have enough to get by while negotiating terms with the different magazines and newspapers so prices for your work is reasonable.
It's basically making a commitment to a profession instead of a company.


What different types of contract could a freelance worker have?
A freelancer would have to have contracts with very specific terms. They will primarily use Fixed Term Contracts. This contract gives the contractee a fixed amount of time to finish a certain job. Once they have completed the task to the expectations and requirements of the contact they are no longer employed by the company. Usually these contracts can't be negotiated although occasionally an employer will negotiate with a freelancer if they want more time or a little bit more money.
When employing a freelancer, the contractor is still responsible for the health and safety of the contractee, so if one had an accident or even died doing the work, the family of the wounded could sue causing legal damages to the company. Tender Contracts are also commonly used so the contractee can get many different articles/pieces of work.


What qualities do you think you need to be a good freelance worker?
To be a successful freelancer, you'll need many attributes. I think one of the most important qualities you'd need would be discipline. Many opportunities will show themselves when you're looking for jobs and once you've grown a reputation you'll be approached by employers. You'll be tempted to take as many as you can, at first this might seem like a good idea because you'll be making more money. But eventually you'll have too much work to do and you'll have no time for yourself which could lead to depression. Responsibility and decision making, you'll need to be responsible when talking to employers because they are, temporarily, your bosses. You'll need to take responsibility for the actions you make and the things that you write, make sure that you know the company that you're doing the work for. Management skills, you'll need to be able to finish a piece of work by the time required and you'll need to be able to schedule your work so that you can finish all the work that you've agreed to do. You need proffesionalism so that your contractor will treat you as a freelance consultant for their firm, not as an employer. This can mean a number of things; most importantly, you'll do what you've agreed to do on time and you'll honour the things that you've promised. You're honest and straight up with your contractors if there are any problems which make you need more time. Finally, I think persistence is extremely important because being a freelancer is extremely challenging and it may not be immediately rewarding. When you see your email inbox full of rejection emails and not interview invitations, you might start to doubt your skills, but you need to get over that bump and eventually people will begin to see your work and send you the offers.

What could be the negative aspects of being a freelancer and why?
Finding work when you start is arguably the biggest hump in the road, there are so many other freelancers who already have a reputation for good work in your sector, so why would they hire you?
You will have to fiercely and vigorously sell yourself to these companies, show how dedicated you are to your profession and people will start to notice the effort you put in and see how fantastic your work is. As I said earlier, it can eventually be quite depressing if you don't have any activities that you like to do in your spare time. The constant isolation of working from your home if you're in a particular sector. One thing that puts a lot of freelancers off is the lack of benefits, you have no sick pay/leavers pay. You can take all the holiday you want although you won't be getting any income therefore you probably won't be able to manage to survive comfortably - the way you've grown accustomed to. You could be working for a long period of time at once, a client might need something very fast so you'd be working around the clock to get something finished, this also leads onto the variable income and variable workload; overall it's a very inconsistent way of living.
It's generally hard to work from home. There are so many distractions, you might have to finish some work in the next hour but you just can't miss your favourite football team play their rivals therefore making you not be able to finish your work. This comes with the earlier mentioned self-discipline.

If you could choose a type of freelance contract to have, which one would you pick and why?
I would pick a Fixed Term Contract. This way I know exactly what they expect me to do, when to have it finished for them and how they want the certain piece written or done. I want them to know that as soon as they're happy with the work that I've done for them, I want to be paid the agreed amount and go our separate ways. I would want the company to be a little bit negotiable with the terms as I could possibly have personal things happening or maybe I wanted a little bit of extra money however I wouldn't be expecting them to agree as they probably set what they want and what they're giving me with no negotiating.

What sort of resources would a freelancer need in this area?
You'd need the equipment to do whatever sector you're in. For a journalist you'd need knowledge, and a computer. Usually, the contractors don't give you the equipment, although for some sectors they probably do. You'd need the appropriate software which allows you to finish the work you need to do for your contractor to the standards you've agreed to.




My chosen area of journalism is the Sports/eSports area. I have an interest in these areas and a pretty good knowledge.  The work carried out in this area could be many different types of work ranging from stories about the latest transfer rumours, opinion pieces on recent games and statistics and general reviews on the latest games/news/scores.
In this sector, there's not many resources that you would need to do this work. You would need a computer with the correct software to be able to write up your work, you would need transport to be able to go to the games and events that you're writing up about whether it's a local, unknown game for a small, local newspaper or England playing at Wembley as well as a knowledge of the games so your article is as interesting as possible. Usually freelancers will use Fixed-Term Contracts as they don't want to be working for a company for a long time so they keep getting opportunities. Especially in the Sporting industry as there are games all the time so you'll be constantly writing different types of articles for different people, which could be seen as a disadvantage as you'll be working a lot of hours. In the sporting industry, there are a lot of different companies that have a good reputation that many journalists aspire to join: BBC Sport, Sky Sport, Virgin Sport, Sports England and many other smaller companies and even magazines that produce footballing articles. You could even do work for your favourite football club in the PR department, or producing articles for the website.
As any journalist in any industry must, you've always got to consider the legal considerations - especially when you're a freelancer. If you slander or libel in one of your articles, your whole reputation is ruined as there are many other freelancers people would rather temporarily employ than one known to have lied in their work. 

Add more for distinction!



What is income tax?
Income tax is a tax you pay which directly correlates to the amount you get paid. 
Income tax comes out of many different things like direct income, pension and even benefit pay from your job. Usually, the employer will take tax from your income before you're given your salary although if you're self employed, you have to keep certain documentation of pay and work done and pay your income tax manually.

What is National Insurance?
National Insurance is the system in which mandatory payments are made by all employers and employees to give assistance to the government for healthcare, the unemployed and the elderly.
Some people will pay different amounts dependant on how much you earn and how you choose to pay your contributions. There are different classes:
Class 1 - If you are earning between £112-£155 a week, you pay the lowest amount and these costs are deducted from your salary.
Class 2 - This class is for the self-employed, you don't have to pay unless you are making £6000 annually.
Class 3 - Voluntary Contributions. If you don't pay your National Insurance, you'll get gaps in your Record resulting in more payments required. Usually, if you don't have at least 15 years on your National Insurance Record, you won't be given your pension. Voluntary Contributions allow you to fill the gaps and clean your record so you won't be made to pay more annually.
Class 4 - People making over £8060 profits.
When you reach the state pension age, you can stop paying National Insurance contributions.

What does VAT stand for and how much is it set at?
VAT means Value Added Tax and it's typically set at 20% on most products. Alternatively, there is a reduced rate on some products and services. There is also the 'zero rate' where there is no VAT at all. Usually the zero rate is on the majority of foods and baby clothes. Things like stamps, financials and property transactions are excluded from the VAT for obvious reasons.

You are doing a job which involves you travelling to Swindon, either by train or by car, staying overnight. You will have three meals while you're there - dinner, breakfast and lunch.

You want to make around £100 a day net - i.e. after your tax has been taken out. Work out how much you are going to charge the company for the job.

A train to Swindon from Portsmouth at peak times is roughly £18 pounds each way, so it would be £36. I will stay in the Campaline Hotel, which costs £60 a night. I think it's a reasonable hotel as it's only 2 stars - the hotel has breakfast, lunch and dinner dining which according to reviews is relatively cheap. I valued the whole hotel and dining at £90.
90+36=126
£126+£100 profit = £226 + £52 tax.

I will charge the company £278, paying 52 in tax and 126 in accommodation and dining.

You need to tell the company how much you expect your expenses to be.

Production of the content I was hired for wouldn't take too long once I had all the information and I was interested in the topic, since I personally would be doing writing the resources wouldn't be too expensive. I would charge an extra £21.


Outgoings

1. Office Rent (if not working from home)


2. Cost of gas / electricity / rent - if working from home (don't forget you can only claim a percentage - check on the HMRC website for details.

3. Hire purchase costs for equipment and software (this applies if you have borrowed money to buy these - for example through Apple finance.
To become a freelancer and start working from home, I would need a laptop/computer to write articles that I have been hired to write. I would also need software to write them on, like Microsoft Office, which would give me all the software I'd need to be able to do the work required. Microsoft Office costs anywhere between £59.99 for the basics to £299.99 for all the features and a lifetime subscription. A Macbook costs 
4. Car / Van 

5. Insurance (public liability, sickness, equipment etc)

6. Phone / line rental

7. Website / domain name / hosting
Website hosting can be extremely cheap, as low as 99p a month, although reliable and professional hosting comes a bit more expensive. From a highly recommended hosting company, it would cost around £3 a month, or £36 a year. 

8. Advertising - who? how much?
9. Other appropriate costs

10. How much would you need to earn per month to ensure you could cover these costs and still make a good living? Based on the figures you calculated last lesson, how many days a week would you need to work to achieve that?

90 Word Copy Writing. 



Djokovic Beats Federer to Reach the Australian Open Final

Novak Djokovic beats Roger Federer, reaching the Australian Open finals!

Storming to a two set lead within the hour, it was looking like Djokovic would serve a humiliating defeat although in the third set Federer made an exquisite fightback. Fourth set was tough for Federer as Djokovic broke him in the eight game and served out the match in just over two hours.

Foiling Federer’s fightback in the third set, Djokovic knocks Federer and prepares to play the winner of Olympic champion Andy Murray and Milos Raonic.

“It was very close, I feel like I am at the peak of my career.” Djokovic said courtside.


Vox Pop - no more than 90 seconds long (with cue)

What do you think about Instagram allowing 60 second adverts?




Voice Piece 

"Wolfsburg have signed David Bytheway, one of the best Fifa players in England. The Twenty-Two year old has been playing FIFA professionally since he was Seventeen. Here's Jake Stokes with more information."

"After representing England at the FIFA Interactive World Cup, he was invited to multiple tournaments in Las Vegas, Brazil and New York. The 22 year old 



Business Plan.

Jake Stokes Sports Journalism

I will be in the sports journalism industry. I would prefer to be writing for an online source, rather than a newspaper or a magazine. I will write about a variety of sports, primarily the ones that I am knowledgeable about and enjoy watching – like Football, American Football and Tennis. I would do many different types of articles from match reviews to articles about the happenings and latest events in the sporting world.
It is important that you have knowledge of the sport and you keep a close eye on what’s going on so that your work is on par, if not better, than competitors and other organisations. It’s also important that your sources and information are accurate so that you don’t report wrongly.
Sport Journalism is often mocked for being a not-so-serious style of writing as we don’t necessarily cover ‘serious’ topics that newsreaders would in front of a news desk. Although in the past decade, it has grown a shocking amount and demanded a large amount of respect. It has become an essential quality that all large media outlets should want and should have as it attracts a lot of readers as sports get more popular. I only see it getting bigger in the future.
My writing is marketable to a large amount of publications and people, a lot of people love sports, therefore a lot of people want to read about it. I could do articles for Newspapers, online publications, columns for magazines, whoever needs it.
I have knowledge of the sports that I would like to write about which gives me an advantage, also American football isn’t that popular in the UK so not many journalists specialise in it therefore it wouldn’t be as hard to sell articles about this subject.  I write in my spare time about subjects that I enjoy which gives me an advantage instantly to people who don’t.

I would like a platform to publish my work so that I can get feedback from readers and my platform so that I can improve my writing. 









































Tuesday, 29 September 2015

Graphic Narrative - Paul

Perhance to Dream,  Reviewing a graphic novel.

The Colour - The colours used are appropriate and the ways they're used are very clever. When the characters are talking in the dream, the colours are bright and unrealistic and when they talk in reality everything looks more natural and blunt. There isn't a wide range of colours however, just simple, primary colours with different tones.
The Text - I think that the text is pretty boring as it's all just plain text, all in the same size and all the same colour. The only time that the text changes is when they put some in capital letters so you know that it's important although they could have done more.
The Use of Images - All of the images are hand drawn and then put into photoshop. I think most of the images look pretty good but it's clear that some were reused where they have just been flipped around.


Artist Appreciation - CentralIllustration.com

CIA's, or Central Illustration's, work is the most inspiring to me.

CIA are based in London and are considered to be a huge inspiration to online graphics in the UK.
They focus on 'Contemporary Commercial Art and Interactive Motion Graphics.

They have done projects for multiple museums and companies but they also do work for individuals.

                                                                 
                                                               I specifically like this project done, by artist Jonny Wan who works for CIA. He travelled around to multiple countries and made different bits of work about what he saw and the general culture of the country. I like the 'cartoony' style he used in the majority of the work. There isn't much text used in the project although he primarily uses bright colours on top of each other so they stand out.    




Jamie B Edwards (urbancolors)

This is Jamie B Edwards from Urbancolours who does football related artwork. He also does large landscape images of cities in this same style. I like his work a lot and it looks like something I could try and recreate in my work. I like the use of all his colours and how they compliment each other with complimentary colours. He tends to stick to very bright images all the time. He makes his work very realistic usually although he tends to colour the sky the colour of the football team's stadium in that piece of work.

Jamie tends to stay away from text as he doesn't think it belongs in artwork (www.urbancolours.com). I like the way he does this as it lets the image tell the whole story.
In general, my favourite thing about his work is the fact that it looks very real. You could go to Everton's football ground and see what's in the picture. It's almost like he takes pictures and recreates them on Photoshop or Illustrator.



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BMD Design






BMD are a French design organisation.

I think their work is really appealing and their use of words inside of the actual images almost makes it look like the objects are made from the words is very clever. Their use of complimentary colors on cool colors makes everything stand out and their use of color is always appropriate to the image.

I think taking inspiration from their work is a good idea for our graphic narrative as, to me, their work gives off quite a dark and eery feel. Looking at their website, the majority of their work is done in dark blue or black.

                                                                                                                                                         



                                                                                                                                                              Statement of Intent - 

What Grimm tale have you selected and why?

I chose Little Red Riding Hood because I think with one of the main characters being a wolf, it would be relatively easy to turn it into a more sinister graphic. I also know the story well and find it already enjoyable so I think this is the best one for me to do.


What format will your Graphic Narrative take?
My Graphic Narrative will take the form of a comic book because everyone knows the story of Little Red Riding Hood so putting it into a comic without words will be interesting as everyone will perceive it differently.


How will you change your script to make it more modern, historical or futuristic twist to your script, illustrating a mood/style or intended target audience?
I am keeping the story as it is throughout the most part, although I am changing the classic ending with a more dark ending where the wolf actually kills Red and her grandmother. I have decided that I am also going to keep the friendly appearance of the original story so that the ending is more of a shock. I have also decided to take out one of the characters - that being the lumberjack who eventually comes to Red's aid.

What designers or illustrators do you feel will influence and inspire the style you are working toward and why?
I would like to use inspiration from the CIA, whose work I analysed above. Although I don't think that their style would work for a dark tale as they use bright colours in their work. So I don't think I will have any influence.

I am going to create my product in photoshop only as it is what I am most comfortable with. I am going to need to use a variety of tools, although mostly the shape tool, magic wand and crop. I will also use other techniques like changing opacity and depth of images and even text.



Final Product -                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            











EVALUATION OF FINAL PRODUCT
Above is my final product. I swiftly decided to use photoshop to produce it as opposed to Illustrator as I am much more familiar with Photoshop and it's tools. I used many different tools to make it. Mainly, I used the shape tool and the crop tool as I had to draw a lot of shapes onto the frames . I drew the backdrop squares to create the sky and grass illusion. I also drew the clouds and had to draw many squares to cover spots which looked bad or didn't crop correctly. In my narrative, I gave the ending a dark twist although with the colours and start of the story, I kept it bright and upbeat so it seemed like the original tale. I also didn't give it a definite ending so the consumer could decide how it ended in their head - I thought this gave it a more interactive feeling. Instead of just having frames, I decided to have boxes at the bottom of each frame that was a text narrative that you could follow. I think overall my narrative was good, in terms of quality. I feel like I could have gone with a more dark visual so that it was clear I had put a twist on it although if you follow the narrative you can notice. I also think I could have made the frames clearly as in the forest scenes there's a lot going on which forces some of the images to over lap. I think It was right to add some text, as well as have a graphical narrative as it could have been hard to follow. I didn't use to much as it's not needed due to the graphic being the main story-teller.